tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post1328192659297287628..comments2023-04-13T15:56:45.314+05:30Comments on Scribbles, Visuals And Doodles: GoodbyeMrNarcihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07548260954724720974noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-51343583050230162182010-10-08T18:43:42.485+05:302010-10-08T18:43:42.485+05:30.. very well written :)
Loved the concept.... very well written :) <br />Loved the concept..keren rebellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06867310021744300563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-49281757987854450582010-09-06T23:39:08.836+05:302010-09-06T23:39:08.836+05:30@Hrisha: I don't know actually, or I don't...@Hrisha: I don't know actually, or I don't remember... I wanted to do a piece based in a cemetery and then I came up with the use of a couple because this other story I was writing involved a couple too... So I combined the two ideas...<br /><br />@Paras, Mythili, Pacific Hues & Vev: Thanks guys...MrNarcihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07548260954724720974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-79612899759752563082010-09-06T23:21:21.746+05:302010-09-06T23:21:21.746+05:30Where did u get d concept of 'break-up' in...Where did u get d concept of 'break-up' in a cemetery??<br />**( I read d story before )**hrishanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-59428410223651322112010-09-02T17:51:54.803+05:302010-09-02T17:51:54.803+05:30I must admit, it was predictable. However, though ...I must admit, it was predictable. However, though I knew you were taking this from Point A to Point B, the way you took it there was handled quite beautifully.<br /><br />I felt it was a touch too cold, and very overtly categorized the characters as Victim and Perpetrator, although even Charlie seemed to know what was coming,so in a way he too was responsible for the relationship ending. Here I got the feeling that Charlie was unceremoniously dumped. Then again, that happens in real life sometimes as well.<br /><br />You should definitely continue writing short stories such as this one.<br /><br />ParasParashttp://justpazz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-62466710949088700142010-09-01T15:05:37.075+05:302010-09-01T15:05:37.075+05:30well written with an element of thrill to it...bt ...well written with an element of thrill to it...bt the end i fell made a slight decrescendochryselliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08862142651630073213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-5640061955889059222010-09-01T09:58:33.228+05:302010-09-01T09:58:33.228+05:30End of love in a place where you finally end up in...End of love in a place where you finally end up in? Amazing...The feeling of helplessness, despair and anger at the unfairness of life - echoed in both the surrounding and the situation you described...And what's amazing is that I have a pathetic imagination, but I could perfectly imagine the setting you created...You really are very good with words, Mr.Narci!Mythili Charinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-14584420543084938372010-08-31T21:31:35.317+05:302010-08-31T21:31:35.317+05:30interesting, for a guy who's never been in a r...interesting, for a guy who's never been in a relationship(or have you?), it was amazingly real...<br />...had the coldness to it, characters were very real...and loved the metaphorism...Proshanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14768709157175259346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-18860776914436647812010-08-30T20:25:09.810+05:302010-08-30T20:25:09.810+05:30hey thanx alot.. i just did tht :)hey thanx alot.. i just did tht :)W!((!@Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523819623812218292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-60687832329560876442010-08-29T13:05:43.742+05:302010-08-29T13:05:43.742+05:30@William: permission granted... :P Let's see w...@William: permission granted... :P Let's see wat u do...<br /><br />@the rest: Thanks...MrNarcihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07548260954724720974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-28888826470123803402010-08-29T11:39:30.452+05:302010-08-29T11:39:30.452+05:30loved the concept... those lil paras is soo typica...loved the concept... those lil paras is soo typically u... lovely description... seems like uve been observing the cemetries quite closesly... <br /><br />i really found 1 line funny :- We continued walking. I saw a gravestone that bore the deathdate April 7, 1985 - my birthdate. lol .. <br /><br />hmmm m soo tempted to modify this post again :)... kinda remake! ;)W!((!@Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14523819623812218292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-7564787945002642672010-08-29T08:34:15.574+05:302010-08-29T08:34:15.574+05:30d necrophiliac within me says she's just a fig...d necrophiliac within me says she's just a figment of his imagination...Warrennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-75058555625344355122010-08-28T20:31:18.732+05:302010-08-28T20:31:18.732+05:30liked it....liked it....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08745513716614883726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-29327166271231771622010-08-27T15:08:38.720+05:302010-08-27T15:08:38.720+05:30Very nice Runcil !makes for an interesting read on...Very nice Runcil !makes for an interesting read only one mistake( Wgy couldn't she say it looking at me?!)<br />The setting the concept and ur descriptions always get me ! <br />Like all the little touches you have added to make it whole.. nice ....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06135659091448282291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-38778381652053269132010-08-27T08:43:40.685+05:302010-08-27T08:43:40.685+05:30waah waah, lekin i agee with what chef told u, too...waah waah, lekin i agee with what chef told u, too much detail in bits and piecesNishtha Kanalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06262954617067625909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-49718277481596751682010-08-27T07:03:25.525+05:302010-08-27T07:03:25.525+05:30thanks... :)thanks... :)MrNarcihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07548260954724720974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8853143878043609924.post-61226732121953453342010-08-27T01:19:41.345+05:302010-08-27T01:19:41.345+05:30OMG.. this wat u upto in class... i simply loved i...OMG.. this wat u upto in class... i simply loved it.. sounds plain everyday..simple... nuthin big.. no big english .. (everyday talk kinda thing)... simple...naicc...:)))Sylvianoreply@blogger.com